text 6:Breathless

I like the story.

The author got asthma, so he missed the final rugby game which was against the Bay Tigers. He felt sad. Luckily, his friends Asafo and Lotu offered their comfort to him. Moreover his lovely family did their best to cheer him up.  The author and his friends made a plan, to steal the trophy.  They went into a club room, but Darell was training there, so the mission failed. Darell was chasing them at that moment, Asafo and Lotu threw the author into a trolley, which was very thrilling but exciting. 

This is my favourite sentence in the story: "Anybody can be your friend when you're happy. It takes true friends to be there when you're sad." In my opinion, true friends need to be kind, helpful, honest, friendly and tolerant with each other.


by Eric
2021-2-8

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